• Alphane Moon@lemmy.world
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    11 hours ago

    like too many episodes have Harry or someone show up at the end to deliver a five minute exposition explaining what was happening.

    This sounds like some teenage level writing.

    • makyo@lemmy.world
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      5 hours ago

      I mean not everyone can be Craig Mazin but Foundation was missing a lot of the basic elements that make for good storytelling